Dreaming

by The Flame Within   Jun 10, 2005


Let me sleep longer as dreams embrace my heart
wishing this never ended from when it had start

i desperately hold on to an image of your face, not letting it out
as reality enters my mind and takes it away as my mind shouts

only a few more minutes of this paradise inside
this comfort that brings me peace in where i hide

where i can always be with you, and hold you tight
that feeling always feels so right

i close my eyes, and you are by me
but then i ask can this really be

i feel you, so close, down to my core
i think i will go to sleep and dream once more

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  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Brilliant babe!!!! 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Eden

    very good poem. I liked it a lot. I read it through a couple times today :) Keep up the awesome work, alright? Talk to you later, tata

    Eden

  • 18 years ago

    by She Is Now Gone Away

    Excellent Nick keep it up and never stop

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    beautiful!!!! you're extremely talented. keep it up!
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    I also love the last couplet! Very sweet, Nick! Great write, 5.5
    Car