Comments : The never ending game

  • 18 years ago

    by InMyWorld

    im working on the music to that one right now since its my latest...so maybe you will hear it someday (hopefully) :) thanks for voting/commenting!!

    Sara

  • 18 years ago

    by InMyWorld

    im working on the music to that one right now since its my latest...so maybe you will hear it someday (hopefully) :) thanks for voting/commenting!!

    Sara

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    it all comes together at the end great poem

  • 18 years ago

    by InMyWorld

    i've already rated a lot of your poems, Noni...just so you know :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Prince Enigma

    The never ending game is sometimes the most dangerous game..

  • 18 years ago

    by Synyster

    very true. i'm feelin it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    i didn't really get it...sorry v.v

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    That would be very nice in a song. Great job!!! the ending was good.

  • 18 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    it wold be a great song good job

  • 18 years ago

    by erikka baby

    Very good song. I loved it. I thought the rhyming was perfect and it flowed so well. Keep it up ♥

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    I think this is another great song! You have a great talent I feel songs are very hard to write! Unique and creative! Brooke~

  • 18 years ago

    by Britney


    That poem was outstanding, It had me from the start to the finish. Great job and i hope to read more soon so keep writing you have alot of talent.