Comments : One Last Stab (Emma)

  • 18 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    This is a poem about the Woman i am dating at the moment...she is someone who is truely special, different from all the rest.

    I love her truely. Emma I love you and i hope you are happy with the poem, i worked really hard on this one sweety.

    I love you lots and lots, but not like vodka shots lol

    Love you Emma,
    Yours Forever,
    Shaun MacKinnon

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Aww. I'm so very happy for you Shaun... and this is a major step up from the depressing poems lol. But heh, just one question... why did you lose your name in the poem ... isn't that like sacrificing yourself?...that seemed a lil off, but anyhow, nicely done.

    Love
    Heather.
    ps. I finally broke up with Wade...If I told you why I did you'd probably laugh, lmao. --Later. And heh, thanks for telling me who wrote that quote, Mr. Philosophies. I appreciiate it tons.

  • 18 years ago

    by DestinyAwaits

    Is this the EMMA that is on here? Just curious. Great write and keep up the great work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    <img src=http://pic.piczo.com/img/i68628356_75075.jpg>
    <img src=http://pic.piczo.com/img/i68628519_19867.jpg>

    Just wanted to wish you luck with her & wanted to thank you for being such a wonderful person in life. Bless you.

    <3Heather.

  • 18 years ago

    by Noelle k.

    aww this is a really sweet poem i love it along with all your work.

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    *sigh* True love is so sweet.

    xxx

  • I think it would be easier to follow if you broke down in to longer stanzas.But maybe that's just me. But it was a beautiful poem though.Great word choice.Good flow.5/5

    -Amber