Curious Little Bear

by LoVeAbLeShOrTie   Jun 15, 2005


A couple slices here and there
Never satisfied the curious little bear
Please just a little deeper
Begging, and begging for them to go deeper
Just a couple more
I'm loosing everything
I'm standing on the edge looking down
6 feet straight down
I'm starting to think that 6 feet isn't that far
Please just hold me
Heaven save me
Please no more pain
Just hold me
Please come fast ..
I think I'm starting to fall

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  • 18 years ago

    by natalie

    Oh i like it a lot. did you know 'I'm starting to think that 6 feet isn't that far' is also from a creed song? its a good poem btw :D

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Full of sadness! You paint the picture in such a creative way. Short but you expressed a lot using only a few words. Take Care! Brooke~

  • 18 years ago

    by ..::.alreadyGoNe..::.

    holy shit ashley it sounds like ur trying to cut. hope it's just in the poem. anyways it was good 5/5 had a lot of feeling in it.
    tiffy