w0w... once again... i loved it! i really hope that your ok though! i no im alot younget then u but still... if u need someone to talk to im always here ALWAYS! another 5/5

wow nice poem well done

i think the two other comments here pretty much sums up what i was gonna say. Another great play on words and so full of emotion. keep up the good work. 4/5

-kk-

wow, I loved the way you wrote it
specially the ending was very good.
It had a very good flow.
thanks for your lovely comment.
take care,
marjan

wow, I loved the way you wrote it
specially the ending was very good.
It had a very good flow.
thanks for your lovely comment.
take care,
marjan

Very interesing poem! 5

This is great! Many a time I have stared at the mirror wondering who it was I'd become and if I could ever go back...Great write, I'm sure many can relate!

excellent poem, something I can really relate to....Nice flow and rhyming, very emtional and so full of meaning and feelings...

*Hugs Sabrina*

Wow! So emotional and deep! Good work, keep it up! 5/5

-Stephanie-

Wow what a great poem

it sux when a parent isnt there
my dad never cared

love the poem tho 5/5