its good keep up the good work...please rate and comment on my thanks xxx

Alissa, again- awesome. You capture what so many feel inside of them. You chose not to hide how you feel from yourself. I love that! Its an awesome poem, and I AM STILL HERE FOR YOU. I know how you feel. You are a gorgeous girl, and an awesome poet. You don't deserve to feel that way~! Make it your goal everyday to just make it through another day. Live life day to day. Worry about the moments your'e living, and forget about those who pretend to care. You have my email if you need to talk. Stay strong and smile- I'm sure it gives people strength when they can get a smile out of you. Just dont give up. Things will get bad before they can get better. The bad times will pass. Just stay strong through them. Your poems and all the people on this site need and care about you. Whether you know it or not- your writing doesn't only help you!
Love ya girl!!!
Love always,
Lyndsey

hey this is such a good poem...i loved the ending and i know how u feel..in a way..i m sry that you feel this way and if u ever need to talk i am here for you!

xoxo,
~*Sarah*~

hey love ur pome its touch remined of me how i use to be but in not any plz read and coment on mine 1-10 ill give u a 10

i loved it i know exacally how it feels but i havnt cut in a while instead i smoke or get high but yeah great poem 5/5

not the best? i like it! it makes it so much better because its what YOU feel and how it effects you...this is amazing!

love and hugs

I dont care if u dont think its gd.. I THINK ITS FANTASTIC... keep on ritin...

Thx 4 the quote..

XxX

This poem didn't have an exact form, but that didn't matter b/c that is how good it was. That sounds so much like my life, it almost makes me laughter. Another amazing poem sweetie!

-Mikochan