Is it easy to state you 've cried over a girl? Any-way tat was another excellent poem.
Read mine some-time and comment from poet to another.

Nice one this girl you talk about there must be something special about her.from the poem i hope that you find another just as good if not better.keep it up!

Aww really liked it sweetheart, keep up the good work.
this poem was really sad by the way
-Love Ashley

Wow hun..
I loved it. The poem was sad but you have talent..and lots of it Joe!!!
Thanks for commenting on my poems by the way(there is one on there bout you!!!) anyway great work

Juls

That was good but it wasn't great. The diction was okay but there were great lines in it.
~DFTI

Wow, for such a sad conclusion of a poem i never read such a happy ending. i didnt expect the ending like that, very well wriiten

This is a short and sweet poem that i absolutely adore!!!!
It one of those poems, that you'll look back on in 10 years and say, " i'm a freakin' awesome poet"

my fav bit is
"But I am neither mad nor sad.
For we have made many happy memories together."

Its a great poem, that expresses so much

5/5

I can relate though

Mmm sad poem. I love the simplicity you started with as a poet.
I love poems where feelings are revealed that way, cause many ppl may relate to that. NOt personally but this was wel written.. and truthfully.

5/5 being ur 1st