Broken angel

by myxlittlexcut   Jun 17, 2005


The halo on her head
is crooked and dim
The wings on her back
are useless and torn

A gossamer gown
hangs limp and tattered
A heavenly voice
now a haunting scream

Falling from grace
losing a sacred soul
No one ever wants
a broken angel

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  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Dont worry huni, i got it to, i know it hurts, but dont u ever stop writing, we have freedom to write our feelings, and peple have no right to mock us like this, but they do, and it really hurts, but i loved this poem so much, and all of ur writing, and i understand. stay strong,
    lots of luv,
    xxEmmaxx

  • 18 years ago

    by foxy cleopatra

    WTF? dont mean 2 b rude...but y do u get 2 b an angel? ? Like, what makes u so special?Aer the rest of us angels as well? Or is it just you?

  • 18 years ago

    by foxy cleopatra

    WTF? dont mean 2 b rude...but y do u get 2 b an angel? ? Like, what makes u so special?Aer the rest of us angels as well? Or is it just you?

  • Hey, i really like this poem aswell, it's quite short compared to others but is every bit as powerful and well written.
    You've said all you need to say in it and it's really good.

    Thanks for commenting on my poems, i appreciate it.

    <3 Charli XxXxX

  • 18 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    I like all your poetry. Thanks for the kind remarks about mine about trees. I still can't believe they cut them all down. Long story!!! many people felt terrible. keep up the good words

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