Fear

by holly   Jun 17, 2005


Awakened by an echo, so deep in her soul
A passionate force, no longer whole

Her tears are cold, she hurts inside
the pain it stabs like 1000 knives

She has no more strength, she holds only lies
Her cries scream out, late in the night

Her spirit is weak, no longer pure
the image is blurry, there is not a cure

Alone she remains, waiting in dark
her fear goes UN-noticed, shes falling apart

Her insides are cut, her heart is frayed
she stays locked up day by day

UN-satisfied she lives, UN-satisfied she stays
this pain is unreal,
a fragile slave.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jordan

    This poem is good. It holds alot of emotion, but I (sorry Im a little dumb) am missing some of it. I mean there isn't a reason to be feeling this way. And although the poems good I still don't understand the middle, ya know? Sorry if I sound like an idiot!

    Much Love,
    Jordan-Paige

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenna

    Holly!!
    You are such an incredible poet! aww your amazing!!<3333 awe the flower!! OMG Its so so so cute!! OMG Today was probably the best day of your life today!!! Awwww it is so cute! I am so incredibly happy for you!! You+Kody=<33333 Lol he is sitting on the computer next to me playing Habbo Hotel woooo lol and I am on here commenting you and watching Pirates of the Carrabien!! wooo i am to cool!!This is going to be a really long comment!! i hope my party is going to be fun!! Angus is really confusing me cause I dunno who to beileve,him or Chris!! Cause that just seems like such an Angus thing to do, as much as I don't want to beileve it I kinda have to don't I? Hmmm whatever BAMBI!!! AHHHH Great times!! I am so sad that today is the last day of school I am so scared for finals!!!! Anywho I dunno what else to say!!! Oh oh but is Kody a good kisser? lol that was so funny!! hmmmmm lol kidding!!! <33333333333333333333333 Your incredible thank you so much for today!! You can always make me smile! You made me cry with that letter again!! Lol k well i gotta moter my dear! I LOVE YOU x8599057593047512785750295889324097540220165465487561205648976543200867894051897684153065189998765160651687987613200 k bye!!<3

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenna

    Holly!!
    You are such an incredible poet! aww your amazing!!<3333 awe the flower!! OMG Its so so so cute!! OMG Today was probably the best day of your life today!!! Awwww it is so cute! I am so incredibly happy for you!! You+Kody=<33333 Lol he is sitting on the computer next to me playing Habbo Hotel woooo lol and I am on here commenting you and watching Pirates of the Carrabien!! wooo i am to cool!!This is going to be a really long comment!! i hope my party is going to be fun!! Angus is really confusing me cause I dunno who to beileve,him or Chris!! Cause that just seems like such an Angus thing to do, as much as I don't want to beileve it I kinda have to don't I? Hmmm whatever BAMBI!!! AHHHH Great times!! I am so sad that today is the last day of school I am so scared for finals!!!! Anywho I dunno what else to say!!! Oh oh but is Kody a good kisser? lol that was so funny!! hmmmmm lol kidding!!! <33333333333333333333333 Your incredible thank you so much for today!! You can always make me smile! You made me cry with that letter again!! Lol k well i gotta moter my dear! I LOVE YOU x8599057593047512785750295889324097540220165465487561205648976543200867894051897684153065189998765160651687987613200 k bye!!<3

  • 18 years ago

    by Sammy

    Boo ya girl!!!!!!!!!!!! you rock! i luv sall your poems!!! its the best!!! love ya!
    sammy 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sammy

    Boo ya girl!!!!!!!!!!!! you rock! i luv sall your poems!!! its the best!!! love ya!
    sammy 5/5

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