Can love be cold?

by Kane Burden   Jun 18, 2005


Cold as ice, leaving me in shadows
forever in darkness, waiting for your touch. why do you leave me restless, why do i exsist, the love between us, only enforced with a kiss. my life is meaningless, our love is deep, without your flame, i begin to freeze.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ana Vidovic

    Very sweet poem Kane. Really enjoyed reading it!:D

    Ana*

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    AWW! That's so sweet! Completely adorable...You may have noticed that I've commented on every poem thus far and am slowly running out of things to say! Sowwi, I'll try to be more creative!

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Brilliant love poem...I just love this one. Short but meaningful.

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristine Søndenå

    This is one of your poem that i liked the best. And maybe its a bit about the time you did like that movie. I have seen it before, liked it very much, it was very sweet. Didnt think someone could actually do that in real life, but i was wrong;P

    Its when you lose something, you find out how much you need it. I think that should be the name of my next poem.
    Something likely has happend to be, I resently broke up whit my boyfriend because i thought i had feelings for another guy. But when we broke up i realized that I missed my boyfriend so bad, and the feelingsfor the other guy was just bull. So now i sit her, and my boyfriend dont wanting me back;/

    You meanshend that all my poems are about lost love and sorrow, and so it is. If my life had been full of humor anf hapiness, maybe then i would have wrote about that. But my life is full of difficult love and sorrow, because i always do mistakes in my lovelife. I have actually wrote some poems whos only about sorrow and not love... If you would read "little girl" and "cut" you can see it... please write a comment so i can hear from you;)

    Im reading a bit of your poems every day, hoping that I`ll soon have read all... I injoy reading your poems very much.
    Hoping to hear from you soon.
    Hugs Kristine;D