Walking Alone
by Garrett Jun 18, 2005
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I see myself walking around looking for attention, but i'm not a fovorite, not even close, so no one looks twice. They shun me away as if I annoy, but then again I annoy myself, so i see why. They leave me when they go, they hate me, I try to be like them, but then i hate myself. If they can't take me for me, then I'll go, I'm tired of being something i'm not, tired of the games. I see them all together having fun, then i see myself with them and the fun is gone. I know what they think of me, sometimes i think it too, but if they saw the real me, i don't think they'd understand. I'm tired of being this alone, with no one, no one should have to be this alone without having someone to stop them from pulling the trigger. |
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18 years ago
Well done...only thing I would suggest is to separate the lines... and "fovorite" should be favorite (typo I believe).
"They shun me away as if I annoy, but then again I annoy myself, so i see why." - Yeah, me too...
And, yes, you shouldn't be something or someone you are not...the trouble is finding the people who'll accept you as yourself.
"I know what they think of me, sometimes i think it too, but if they saw the real me, i don't think they'd understand." - And many don't understand, but sometimes you have to give people a chance to try to understand, to see what'll really happen...my problem is I don't know what they think of me, and I'm left with what I think of myself (not good)...
"I'm tired of being this alone, with no one, no one should have to be this alone without having someone to stop them from pulling the trigger." - I'm tired of that alone feeling as well...even though I know I'm not alone, but that doesn't stop the alone feeling. And I agree, no one should feel alone...some people may have someone to stop the trigger from being pulled, but are unaware the someone is there...and some people may really have no one, and I hate that...
Okay, long comment...hope you don't mind :)
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