She...

by FlowerThatDied   Jun 19, 2005


Theres a storm
Whenever my heart is torn
But I see a blue sky
Still I wonder why
Through the moonlit street
I stand full of conceit
Heart starts to race
By the shadowed face
Holding you near
Shedding a tear
Wondering why
I still see a blue sky
When theres a storm,
And my soul is torn,
Close to my heart,
This feeling will start
It's about to begin
This dreaded sin
Holding each other
I start to shudder
Though no holding back
Nothing to lack
Nothing to lose,
Wondering why
I still see a blue sky
When theres a storm,
And my soul is torn,
Hearing a creak,
Trying to seek,
Why I'm so scared,
And why my soul is teared,
Closing my eyes,
I think of the lies,
Laying dead within,
This dreaded sin,
Trying to hide,
From whatever is inside,
Trying to hard,
To hide where I'm scarred,
Now we shall die,
But I don't know why,
This sacrifice,
This thing which does entice,
Now we lay dead,
Inside her head,
She will not stop,
Until we are dead or she has you

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  • 18 years ago

    by Becca

    Wow, tht was so cool! and full of emotions, i dunno wot to say im speechless!
    ura great poet, keep it up!
    Becca x

  • 18 years ago

    by Spitfire

    Wow that good!!

    alot of emotion~

  • 18 years ago

    by ChiquitaLuv

    U go girl!! as i was reading ur poem i got more into it. "u got skillz girl, u got skillz"
    & thank u 4 commenting on mine.

  • 18 years ago

    by MisterScabbedWings

    The format of this poem is really interesting, haven't seen that before. I also liked how you repeated certain things for emphasis. Nicely done. Take Care.

    -PG-

  • 18 years ago

    by Spitfire

    That kol i like it !!

    did i tell u i added u to my favorites!?