Angel of Deception

by Jacklyn   Jun 19, 2005


Night creeps in,
Replacing the light of day,
My comfort slips away,
As dreams and happiness decays,
My smile becomes deceased,
Not scared of darkness,
Just the events that follow it,
He comes without a warning,
No matter where you try to hide,
He finds your soul inside,
And slowly begins to eat away your mind,
Slowly dry out your hope,
Fills your mind with endless lies,
About how I'm unwanted and unloved,
He's the nightmare in my life,
Taking way my want to live,
Who follows me everywhere,
Givin me pain and suffrage each day,
This Angel of Deception is my guardian,
Not welcomed and unwanted,
All because of my third floor bedroom,
When he slipped right in my opened window.

~hey, wrote this at writing camp, we were given a picture and a caption and we had to write something about it. My caption read ~The Third Floor Bedroom, it all began when someone left the window open~ did not know where it really fits in so i put it in dark~ please vote and comment~

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  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    Fantastic poem, really enjoyed it, I think dark is the right category, it really kept me hooked, well done..
    keep it up

    xxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    Hey just got all your comments, it's like 11 o clock haha...listen slow down! It's all right i was away for the weekend too, and everyone had so much stuff...take your time, ~lil slam~ it's all good! Thanx soooooo much for your comments! I aprecia-
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  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    Beautiful title! Beautiful poem! It's very mysterious (did i spell that right? :P) but that's why i LOVE IT! 5/5 Hey, sorry i didn't comment on your newest poems sooner, I've been over at a relative's house all weekend. But i'm back on P&Q!!! Never thought i'd miss it so much...:) Plus talkin to everyone....well, i'll catchya l8r, ~lil slam~ Take Care! Peace and Soooooooooooooooooooooo Much of Mah Luv <33333333333, //Ari\\