I love the line 'I'll whisper you my dreams' - that line says it all

Great poem, I could feel it at times, check spelling too :)

That is a really cute poem.. i liked it alot. Good job 5/5. Check out mine.

Brilliant poem, the love just jumps out and gives you such warmth. Your words are deep and meaningful and show the reader exactly how you feel. Liked it a lot.

its really nice and sweet! ^^, i give u 5/5 pls read mine also

Hey this poem is really good. I like it alot. I have one poem on here so far read it if u want to. Thanks I would really appreciate it.

this is sweet and i like it, its good ya plz comment on mine thanx

this is really a nice poem, karisma. You have got several other nice poems. are u making aim to be the poet?... all the best !

I have to say I love how you expressed yourself in this verse

Now your holding me while I'm sleeping,
your holding me like words to a book,
your embracing me while were all alone
and the first kiss was all it took....

Absolutly brilliant i look forward to reading more.

Take care, Lise

Awwe. i can completely relate to this. this is a great poem, and i love it.

Wow that was really good! i could feel it great flow of words too...overall 5.5

I think this is a really beautiful piece.
i really liked these lines:

and I'll whisper you my dreams,
hopefully at the heat of the moment
you'll understand what they mean.

and every other line lol!
really loved it

This is a really beautiful poem. It had a good beat, a good choice of words, well written, and it flowed perfectly. This is the type of poem I am attempting to write at the moment but I find I am juts not very good at happy poem. :P. Go figure.
Anyway thank you for the comments me and my sister appreciate them.
Great poem, keep it up.
5/5 for sure
Breanna

Sweet poem like it :)