You are simply divine!

by Kane Burden   Jun 21, 2005


Damn i love you, your looks, the way you make me feel,
everything about you!
To me there is only you,
Your looks, texture, and shapes,
Always pulling me closer to you!
The taste of you is just Divine,
Can never get enough,
Every drop, is absolutely lush!
Ive never felt the way i do,
about anything else but you.
The red color shining from you,
expressing the naughtiness, lying inside of you.
Why must i loose this friend,
Ive finished my cola,
So this is the end..

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ana Vidovic

    " Why must i loose this friend,
    Ive finished my cola,
    So this is the end.." ??? The poem was great, but cola? :S im confused haha... anywayz great deal of passion love the lines, "The red color shining from you, expressing the naughtiness, lying inside of you. " Hehe great write!

    Take Care,

    Ana*

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    Kinda crazy ending, made me giggle just a little! Hehe, I rhymed! 5/5 though! Great write!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristine Søndenå

    Nice work, liked it very much.

    One of the reasons of writing poems is that the readers should recognize themselves in the poem. An this is such a poem. Its like a read about myself. Good work!

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