Another Bad Day (Acrostic)

by Nici   Jun 21, 2005


As I woke up this morning, from the same side of my bed
Nothing seemed to block the sad thoughts inside my head
Of course I wanted to be happy, smile all through the day
Though it looks as if I haven’t managed to cover up the grey
How did I reach this point, where I struggle to survive?
Eternally reminded of my lack to stay alive
Remembering those days when I was young and care free

Before I started to feel sad, almost constantly
And when I was able to wear a smile on my face
Dress it up with happiness, like decorative lace

Don’t you think I want my old life back again?
All my days to be happy, like they were then
You’re so wrong; I just can’t make it happen!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Polly

    Wow brilliant poem. flows really well, i love the Acrostic style, and this is a great one.
    ♥ Polly ♥

  • 18 years ago

    by Becky

    Wow i have written acrostics before but none that even come close to sizing up to the greatness of this one. THis poem is just truly amazing. I am rather jealous of your talent, as i find myself being ever so foten on this site.

    lots of love
    *~*Becky*~*

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    This is good.

    well done

  • 18 years ago

    by Mark Coates

    Nice one this poem is so tru Nothing seemed to block the sad thoughts inside my head
    that line is especially tru nice 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by AJ

    Hey, I like the whole acrostic idea. Good job. Thanks for the comment. This has a very nice flow, keep it up.

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