Last words were "I hate you"

by Avrii Monrielle   Jun 21, 2005


When someone dies from murder
You miss them very much
You wish you hadn't said those things
Cause now you have lost touch

My friends mother was killed in a gang fight- I know she didn't deserve it
My friend broke down and cried
He never tried to learn it

His last sentence to her was "I hate you" His last cry was an angry plea
I know he didn't mean to hurt her
His mom was very sweet

She didn't drink,didn't smoke
She even once managed a foster home
Of her daughter's best friend's abuse
From another mother too

I wish I could have met her
I knew she would have liked me
She was all her son had to confide in
And since she's gone the confidee is me

I love my friend so much
It hurts to see him sad
I hope his mother is smiling
Telling him its not that bad

I know her soul lies peacefully
And guards him in his sleep
Her dreams were passed on straight to him
And magically it's so deep

Sleep good my friend
And don't worry about your mom
I'll watch out for you instead of her
And remind you where you're from

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  • 17 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    A few lines (particularly twards the end) seem a little forced. but all in all great poem... very powerfull.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    now this was sad but beautiful.
    Offten when a friend or loved one dies
    there are things said that we wish to take back. I lost my mother at a young age and " I hate you" was the last words from me.