Life

by Becky   Jun 21, 2005


The darkness surrounds me
i cant turn around
i can only go forward
to see what lies ahead

i feel like a mouse in a maze
only motivated by one thing
but in place of the cheese
is my desire to overcome

I'm the puppet your the puppeteer
you control my life
not with your hands but your words
i feel so helpless

but I'm not your average mouse
I'm smarter than the puppet
i will get through
the dark maze of life

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  • 18 years ago

    by avery

    I love how you put yourself in the eyes of an object,
    It makes the poem more interesting to read, great work. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    When I read the first lines I thought this was going to be a very dark poem but instead by the end it is very inspiring. I love it. Keep up the good work.
    *VioletRaven*

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