Comments : Broken Dreams

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    aw this was so sweet! great poem i loved it and realy enjoyed reading it keep writing!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by FlowerThatDied

    That well sweet, thx for ur comment ur a really good writer and I like your work x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    My thoughts exactly, thanx for submitting this!

  • 18 years ago

    by L0KA

    This was so good! You are amazing. You are a good poet and you also seem like a great friend. I really liked this poem. Keep up the great work. Keep your head up and I hope to see some of your future work. Peace. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by creasy

    this is a really good poem! lovely work! keep it up and thanks for commenting on mine! take care. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    aaww hun.. this was absolutely amazing... i loved ur piece.. it was heartfelt and truthful.. the flow wasnt all that gud, and sometimes i lost the rhyme, but ur choice of words was so touching..keep it up.. i adored these lines :
    "we are like fire and ice
    though opposites we still attract"
    i mean, it left an echo in my head..
    ur gr8.. u got my 5
    keep writing!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Clarissa

    thxn again for another excellent write!

  • 18 years ago

    by *liZ*

    beautifully done! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by gasping for air

    i gave you a 5/5 but now thinking back i honestly should have given you a 4.. it didnt catch my attention like i think you could make it... from what ive seen in your other poems i think that you have that talent to dothat.... so keep at it
    good job
    amanda

  • 18 years ago

    by A.Hill

    great poem...

  • this is a madd good poem! keep up the good poems! if you get a chance plez comment and rate my poems and quotes!

    leanna

  • 18 years ago

    by Georgi

    Omg this poem is really good i really enjoyed it, wel done keep it up

    cheetah girls rule! lol

    xxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Clarissa

    Good poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    Wow your an excellent writer
    keep it up

    love always
    tabby

  • Omf I HEART this poem so freaking much!!!!!!!!!!

    ~Miranda~

  • 17 years ago

    by Kay

    I like that poem..your a really good writter..i think your really cute too..keep up the awesome work
    xoxo
    Kay