Bleed

by lunachan   Jun 22, 2005


I want to bleed.
bleed out all the sadness
bleed out the pain and fear.
bleed out the words
to explain how i feel
though its of little use to you.

let me bleed my blood
of taint and sin
let me empty myself
of the impurity
of the jealousy
of the hollow, vain tears
that I've shed through and through.

i want to carry no more
this burden of dark and cold
i hate the fear
i hate the endless heartache
i hate the endless fights
inside my head

rinse it all
wash it away
flush my veins
cleanse me
cleanse me

I'm so sick of being dead

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  • 18 years ago

    by eternal rest

    oh... i like that. the way you ended it was cool... it was like, i want to bleed, i need to bleed.. cause im dead.. "I dont want it, i just need it, to feel, to breathe, to know that im alive" (lyrics from tool) thats what this poem makes me think of. another great one!

  • 18 years ago

    by lunachan

    thanks...
    and i'm ok. thanks alot for your concern though. it means alot to know you care. ^.^
    i was just in one of those moods.
    but i'm ok now. thanks again.
    leah

  • 18 years ago

    by Reflection | noitcelfeR

    oh... wow. i really liked it!! however, coming from you, its pretty scary to be honest with ya. do we need to talk? cause i dont want you doing that to yourself, i know where it leads and i dont want you to be like me. please, leah, if there are problems on your mind, talk and try to resolve them, please... i really did like it though, loved the vocab and the style.

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