You paint the perfect picture of life! You did this in a creative way! Good work! Take Care! Brooke~

Good poem hon.

Well you have an interesting perspective on life and society. I can respect that, and you the way you described your opinion was great. Well done.

~rolo

Intersting poem! very differnt from others i read!

hmm...intersting view on life/mankind. I really like the poem...your style works well...full of meaning. It's a pretty dark look on life i'd have to say... sounds like the cold, hard truth.

xxx

Nice poem! Good topic! Like the comparison! Your a good writer!
=D

so true. i wouldnt want to admit ti though but you're kinda making me by writing sucha great poem.

I loved this poem too. I think the message was great and it was very well written. Great job ღ

5 out of 5, great writing, ur talented xxxxx

WOW! this was a really good poem. it had so much meaning. i loved it

wow this one was really good too...you certainly have a gift!!! luv yas mwah

-kayla-