A million tears

by Dead As Yesterday   Jun 22, 2005


Darkness, Darkness, Darkness
Umbrella crimson sky
waiting my place in line
for my time to die.
My heart is made of sorrow
and my life was built on pain
if I took my life tonight
would you remember me someday
no one knows what’s going on
this eroding of my brain
I need an end to loneliness
Some relief to all my pain
If you could just find a way
And spend some time with me
Help me end this suffering
Say goodbye to misery
I’ve cried a million tears
Each and every bear your name
Ever since I met you
I’ve never been the same

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  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Hey Dave...I'll start by saying that I adore the two opening lines! Loved the vividness of those words! I also am in love with the below lines:

    "I’ve cried a million tears
    Each and every bear your name
    Ever since I met you
    I’ve never been the same"

    Beautifully conveyed, rhythm and flow is flawless and your emotions very much on display in this piece!
    Now as a friend, I am so sorry you are going through such a rough time! I've really been very worried about you! I'll keep you safe within my prayers and if you ever need anything, I'm always here! Love and Peace~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by ShAtTeRrEdTeArZ

    the beginning was a bit rough but it got better towards the end

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