My Love For You Is Mediocre

by CinnamonTwirl   Jun 22, 2005


My Love For You Is Mediocre
Feelings not so strong
When lonely in the midnight hour
Its not for you I long

My Love For You Is Mediocre
As fickle as it seems
When my eyes are laid to rest
Its not you in my dreams

My Love For You Is Mediocre
This fact your not aware
Because of how I give & fawn
You probably think I care

My Love For You Is Mediocre
So this I have to say
This love we shares not good enough
And needs to end today

-Katrina-

hmmm...not sure quite what inspired this. but PLEASE VOTE AND COMMENT. I havnt written in 2 months so im just gettin back into the swing of things. and oh yea...my 18th bday just passed

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  • 18 years ago

    by Falling Up

    Well happy belated birthday! i would really love to hear the type of poem this is, i want to try this unique style.... it flows so well, and has alot of depth.. again, great poem as usual! your definitely on my favorites list

  • 18 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    Very nice poem....Good to have you back and write poems,once again...keep writing and keep always smiling....and belated Birthday wishes....take care...FIVE>>>

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    Very Interesting piece of writing, really makes you think, Excellent Job!

  • 18 years ago

    by CinnamonTwirl

    thankx yall for the wonderful comments and birthday wishes.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kit Kat Katie

    Omg.. i really really liked this one! It was awesome. I love the repetition. Great Job!!

    Love Alwayz,
    Katie Schettler

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