Wow, Thanks

This poem was filled with emotion. You could feel the pain as you read the poem that's good. Only one thing I would do is try and make your lines more equal in length. You had said your poems are not good you're wrong. Have more confidence! Keep posting! ~Brooke~

Not bad at all, first time posting poems here? If so your doing well.

Great job for your first time posting on the site. With some time I see a talented poet in the making. Take care xxx

This one too is filled with tons of emotion...

"You’ve hurt me so many times
I can’t describe the way I still feel for you in these rhymes" My favorite lines. I love when you can refer to the one thing you LOVE (writing) in a poem...

The only thing I found within this piece is that it seemed you were picking words to add just for the sake of rhyming. So it threw the flow off just a bit. All in all I liked the poem. In reading it one can feel your pain...nicely done.

Hey Loved the emotion in this poem. Your a great writer so keep it up and oh yea your rhyming was great!

damn, i can relate! Sucks huh? Good writing tho! Thank you for youur comments. keep writing, you have good ratings!

Excellent poem! 5

Is this true? sad, but good. Keep it up! <3 5/5