This poem was filled with emotion. You could feel the pain as you read the poem that's good. Only one thing I would do is try and make your lines more equal in length. You had said your poems are not good you're wrong. Have more confidence! Keep posting! ~Brooke~
"Youâ€™ve hurt me so many times
I canâ€™t describe the way I still feel for you in these rhymes" My favorite lines. I love when you can refer to the one thing you LOVE (writing) in a poem...
The only thing I found within this piece is that it seemed you were picking words to add just for the sake of rhyming. So it threw the flow off just a bit. All in all I liked the poem. In reading it one can feel your pain...nicely done.