With You

by Alex   Jun 23, 2005


I still see you,
But only in my dreams,
It's scary sometimes,
But it's not what it seems,

You tell me to let go,
But I can't let you slip away,
I know I have to,
Just not today,

Mommy says it will end,
Daddy says it gets better,
But these words mean nothing,
There just words on a letter,

No one can feel,
Just exactly my pain,
My heart was ripped out,
And left every vein,

When they buried you,
It just wasn't the same,
Having you not here,
Unable to call your name,

You are only in my dreams,
Sometimes it feels like you are here,
It's kind of strange,
Like you are always near,

I know you’re gone,
For I wish it were not true,
I'd give anything,
Just to be with you...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    "There just words on a letter,"
    It should be They're, not there, since what you're really saying is:
    "They are just words on a letter."

    I thought this was a good poem. The iines were longer, and that substantially helped make the rhythm stronger. The rhyming was a bit commonplace (most of them are 1 syllable words rhyming with 1 syllable words), but you didn't try to twist around your sentences in order to make the words fit into the rhyme, and you stuck to your scheme the entire way through.

  • 18 years ago

    by Blue eyes~

    Good job alex read mine and coment 2!!! Love U! !

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenn

    that is a *really* good poem not many can say hey i can write really good poetry but if you wanted to you could cause your good! keep writting and i'll keep reading
    xoxox BJ

  • 18 years ago

    by Kisa

    *Cries for a while until actually writing a comment* omg. that's so sad. At first I thought she just moved to another person but I was so shocked when you said she was dead. Nice work. Keep up the good job.

    ~ Nazi (Nakidasu)~

  • 18 years ago

    by wellthoughtoutwords

    that's really sad!! i like it! good work!

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