I like it, a great deal...well written and beautifully expressed.

very beautifully written. I enjoyed reading this one.
much love, Marjan

very beautiful nd so so sweet great job...ur a great writer keep writing...it had a great flow also....5/5....please vote on mine

aww..I hope your alright, and that things work out. the last part reminded me so much of someone I know. love this, and thanks so much for commenting on mine!
~Christina

good poem i liked a good bye love poem saying thanlks i like 5/5

Hpe for whoever you wrote this poem for get's it .. It is so good .. and sounds like it came from the heart .. and you will not go anywhere! no no no .lol you are a good writter kee pit up
5/5
April`

very beautiful! u have alot of talent! keep writing!

Really sad poem once again, the emotions are portrayed excellently, brought tears to my eyes, made me think as well, well done

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Great poem. I was once told that it's a great poem if you feel for the writer.

I felt for u

~*~Chrsitina~*~

wow thats a sad poem, i feel for u, hope everything is ok.
good writing though.

Jacs
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Excellent poem. Sad and sweet. Nice smooth end. X

this is very good. I enjoyed reading it.

I like this...very sweet and heartfelt...

Thanks for the comment!

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Very sad and filled with emotion. Please don't vanish! The poem was written like it came straight from the heart! Good work! Take Care! Brooke

great poem!

another great poem good job.