Wow, That was ohsome.

wow, this is so wonderful. You write
very well. keep it up.
marjan

Nice topic! I cant totally relate!

Sounds like it comes from a brilliant, poetic mind...searching and speaking the truth. I love it.

xxx

i understand this poem. i like it.
5/5
ur very talented
love
paulette

I liked your use of metaphors in this one.

I liked your use of metaphors in this one.

This is definitely sad. But a well constructed poem. Awesome!

I can relate to this poem and the flow was excellent. I loved it. Keep it up the great work ღ

you have such a way of describing how you feel

i thought this poem was really good. interesting topic to write about

I liked this one...you are an awesome writter...luv yas mwah

-kayla-

Hmm...unusual poem,but I found this line to stand out over all else...

One day melts to the next.

a unique way to percieve one day to the next.

Different poem, but i really liked it.

I like the last two lines.