Wonerfully done!!!

wow... refreshingly different!! awesome!! i'm gland u kinda went in a different direction and expanded to different areas of poetry!! great job!! 5/5

You write so wonderfully. really talented. I like your poems.
love you, Marjan

again another good one :) your better than me.. lol

Wow that was brilliant! Very well written! I feel that way about my son. He is now 11 they grow up so fast. I think he will be my only one though! Good message in this poem! Take Care! Brooke

:) its one of those poems that make you go awww... :) but anyways..thats the first i read about a mother and son.. :) it was really cute

good job, i really enjoyed this poem! keep it up!

Good poem

Awwwwwwwwww so sweet

You have kids?? well, anyways it was good i liked it, but there were a few spelling mistakes.

Nicely written 5/5 of course !!
good luck !
amy

Awwww..its so sweet!

Aw, very sweet : )

This is an excellent poem. I like the beginning (and it is very appropriate). The development is efficient, and the structure coherent. In short, this is truly wonderful. My only complaint is this is a bit 'slangy' and maybe this should belong in that section. In any case, the imagery and diction are great. Well done!

I like this poem very much, but you see....

It's not a universal thing, because some mothers all over the world would gladly give up their baby for money, for the "love of their life" and etcetera.

I realy like this, there's nothing I can complain about.

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(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

Gr8 sho of emmotion, and wonderful rhyming. no rhymes seemd forced...gr8 work! 5/5
~*Who Cares?*~

Awww...sucha sweet and cute poem...and its so tru. its so cute... keep it up!
:)
xxx