Comments : Together Forever

  • 15 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    Wow this is such a cute poem! 5

  • 15 years ago

    by Richard

    short but good intentions 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Nee

    although your poems are very short but they have the meaning itself n these little words
    i like your style
    its defferent from the others and it makes you special
    good luck with the coming ones
    XoXoXoXoX
    Nema

  • 15 years ago

    by katie!

    Short yet still emotional and well written, well done good poem

  • 15 years ago

    by Britney

    wow another great poem.. keep it up!

  • 15 years ago

    by stephyG

    omg great poem... really liked it!! please check out my new poem "feelings i CAnt overcome" n tell me wat u fink MWaZz..stephy :):)

  • 15 years ago

    by Joy

    Wow I suck at short poems, but this is absolutely amazing!! You really have the talent for the short stuff...lol. Good job!!

    .:j0y:.

  • 15 years ago

    by Bredada

    i feel like dat i love your poem

  • 15 years ago

    by Arora

    Thanks for all the comments. <3

  • 15 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    So sad! Once again so much emotion with just a few words! Great work! ~Brooke~

  • 15 years ago

    by Cory Mastrandrea

    This one is better than the last love poem i read.

  • 15 years ago

    by Cory Mastrandrea

    This one is better than the last love poem i read.

  • 15 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Aw...your poems do seem to be pretty universal...

    "In my heart Forever
    You will stay"

    Instead...I think it may be better as:

    "In my heart

    You will stay

    Forever"

    or...

    "Forever

    In my heart

    You will stay"

    Just to make the forever more emphasized...
    Works how you have it though...lovely work.

    xxx

  • 15 years ago

    by Kayla

    wow good poem once again short but to the point cute poem...keep it up!!
    luv yas mwah

    -kayla-