Comments : Son's Life Need

  • 18 years ago

    by Richard

    heyy i quite like this nice poem im 2 dum 2 kno what it means lol or 2 lazy to actually think but anyways good poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by greenmunky

    awwwww thas sad but really good dont stop writin ur good!!!!! ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    woah...that was realy good....5/5....it was long but i didnt mind (like i usulayy do) b/c it kept me wanting to ready more into the story that flowed so well great job!!

  • 18 years ago

    by EJ

    wow.. you are a really really good writer!!! i love reading your stuff.. its so amazing.. very good.. bye bye EJ

  • 18 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    this is a really good poem
    very touching

  • 18 years ago

    by Shy

    Beautiful
    i am adding you to my favorites (if theres room(if not i'll have to make it)

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    omgosh...that was sooo sad...it made me cry! great job!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by skyfox

    great poem. simple but says a lot