I Saved Me

by abcede   Jun 25, 2005


If you can't see by now
if you are blind
if you are still caught up
you're out of your mind
don't pull me into this
don't tell me to wait
i will not wait for you
won't wait at the gate
'cuz you've broken my heart
and you know it too
don't give me that sad act
your feelings aren't true
so just leave me alone
your work here is done
but i assure you this
you have not won
i saved myself before
i drowned in your game
i blew out he candle
the tormenting flame

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Daniels

    Great job! This poem was short but it was still really good and had me wanting more.... If u don't mind i would greatly appreciate it if you checked out some of my work? Thanks!
    Hugs n SMiles Ashley

  • 18 years ago

    by music is my medication

    Wow! and i say WOW again.
    is it bout sum1 u no?

  • 18 years ago

    by Rolo

    You know, it's short but still strong enough to leave me satisfied. Good flow an choice of words. I liked it a lot. Great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Emilia

    thanks for checking out my poem! It really meant a lot.. I voted a 5 on this one.. very good! if toy got time please check out my poem "My Dream Boy Dosen't Exist" please! thanks and hugs!

  • 18 years ago

    by ..::.alreadyGoNe..::.

    hey thanx for reading and commenting on my poem. this one was really really good and it holds alot of meaning. 5/5 keep up the good work!

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