That one beer...

by Lauren Waszkiewicz   Jun 26, 2005


This pain of mine,
its all your fault.
our lives have stopped,
come to a halt.

i call for help
but don't make a sound
my life has changed
its flipped around

who used to be in control
is now in the backseat
and the driver of my twisted life
will never give into defeat

we've swerved off the highway
cause you had to drink that beer
now the only thing thats left of me
is a tiny, lonesome tear...

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i am not sure what category this would go under..please help..thanks!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    I think you should put it in the Explicit cat.? i dont know thats just what i think. the poem was sad tho so i guess its fine where it is too.

    anyway..
    excellent job on writing it. it is full with a lot of emotion. keep writing. 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 18 years ago

    by Daze

    Good poem, short, but says a lot of feeling, i gave you a 5/5, great job

  • 18 years ago

    by Daze

    Good poem, short, but says a lot of feeling, i gave you a 5/5, great job

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristen

    I love it, real good