Jealousy

by cizu - joey chan   Jun 26, 2005


Bored with jealousy
the pen starts dancing
words flow smoothly
like river to the sea
a lyric to u from me
a picture how I feel

notes makes a melody
melodies makes a music
a music that I play
about u and me

bored with jealousy
loving u, hurting me
so I set myself free
take this relation easy
and as time goes by
your love will tell no lies

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  • 18 years ago

    by *Unbreakable Soul*

    by the way this one deserves 5 out of 5

  • 18 years ago

    by *Unbreakable Soul*

    wow very good cizus keep up the good job
    I hate to feel jealousy

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    UR GOOD YES U R BOY IM CHATIN WITH U RIGHT NOW MWUAA LOVE BRIDGIE

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Great rhythm / rhyme. It has a nice flow...you're off to a good start...keep writing. I wanna see what you can do. ;)

    One thing though...I think it really is better if you write it all out, the "u" is easy to understand, but sometimes it can get confusing...and it's just nicer if you take the time to write it out...I do things like "gotta" though...just some stuff. lol. okay. i'm gonna shut up now.

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    A very cute love poem.
    -A

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