Death

by Delo   Jun 26, 2005


I see the sight of death in front of me,
It saying here I am you can’t flee.
Today is the day,
I don’t even want to run away.

But I want to do one thing before I die,
I still want to say goodbye.
I also want to say that I love you all,
Then with one bullet to the head I fall.

Now I’m gone for eternity,
But still you can’t see.
You don’t have to cry,
Everything is gonna be alright.

I’ve may have broken your hart,
Put you don’t have to fall all apart.
I know that I’ve loved you always,
All of my life’s days.

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  • 18 years ago

    by I.Lose.It.All

    Its me again lol. my comment is what lisa said except for the 4.5 rating i would put it as a 500000/5 rating

    love you babez
    ~jenny~
    ur gurl

  • 18 years ago

    by I.Lose.It.All

    *cries*

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Hello again lol im hyper :D
    This was written with power, it flowed nicly and didn't seem to be forced :D thats a good thing :D
    I loved the way you are standing up to death, these were my fav lines(stanza :D)
    "But I want to do one thing before I die,
    I still want to say goodbye.
    I also want to say that I love you all,
    Then with one bullet to the head I fall."

    they flowed perfectly and I enjoyed them :D
    Sorry im gonna ramble on but I don't understand how people (points above) say its a good poem then vote low(points to avrege vote)
    I for one am gonna vote 5 I personally wouldn't give it a five i'd give it round a 4.5 but you can't do that so il round it up..this was well writen and dosn't need much if any help well done :D

    x)

  • 18 years ago

    by lindzy

    wow ur such a powerful writer I love all of ur poems, im gunna add u 2 my favs list. another good job 5/5
    ~*lindz*~

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