Unique and creative poem! Very well done! I really liked the ending! Take Care! Brooke~

very expressive...an overused, yet bold subject to write about.

omg ur like an amazing writer, i love ur poems theres so great although it is very sad, u really have a gift, keep up the great work

omg that was so freakin sad...i loved it! ha realy that was a very well done poem...i liked how well it flowed...i'm readin more!! 5/5!!

Creative and well done. Sad poem with a lot of emotion. hugs, love, Ann

Cool 5/5
you are very talented :)

Awesome poem, very well written. Take care and thanks for the comment

great poem, 5

............ I'm speechless......... kilman = David B. 5/5

beautiful

Aw geez, heart wrenching. Well written, nice job. I felt a connection with the story. Keep it up.

this is really touching, and it doesnt approach the subject with too much force. Ur a really good writer!

Wow that was a really good poem but very sad that would be very upsetting if someone actually went through that but I gave it a 5/5, keep up the good work.

Wow that was a really good poem but very sad that would be very upsetting if someone actually went through that but I gave it a 5/5, keep up the good work.

wow that's a really good poem really sad but it flowed great and was easy to read awesome job i love it

great writing. 5/5

OMG.. this is deep.. i mean, i reli felt as if i was the one u wer talkin bout.. i reli liked it.. ur rhyme was amazing n the floe was gr8
keep it up
nouna
thnx 4 the comment

Wow, i could almost feel that pain. Very sad struggling poem and i couldnt think of a way you could possible make it better. GREAT JOB!

very very well written. very sad. nice job!

very very well written. very sad. nice job!