Comments : Decision in Three

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Unique and creative poem! Very well done! I really liked the ending! Take Care! Brooke~

  • 18 years ago

    by No Motiv?

    very expressive...an overused, yet bold subject to write about.

  • 18 years ago

    by ** JeNa **

    omg ur like an amazing writer, i love ur poems theres so great although it is very sad, u really have a gift, keep up the great work

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    omg that was so freakin sad...i loved it! ha realy that was a very well done poem...i liked how well it flowed...i'm readin more!! 5/5!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Creative and well done. Sad poem with a lot of emotion. hugs, love, Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by Shy

    Cool 5/5
    you are very talented :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin

    Awesome poem, very well written. Take care and thanks for the comment

  • 18 years ago

    by Jane

    great poem, 5

  • 18 years ago

    by David Paul

    ............ I'm speechless......... kilman = David B. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    beautiful

  • 18 years ago

    by Rolo

    Aw geez, heart wrenching. Well written, nice job. I felt a connection with the story. Keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by shakenangel

    this is really touching, and it doesnt approach the subject with too much force. Ur a really good writer!

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    Wow that was a really good poem but very sad that would be very upsetting if someone actually went through that but I gave it a 5/5, keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    Wow that was a really good poem but very sad that would be very upsetting if someone actually went through that but I gave it a 5/5, keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kia

    wow that's a really good poem really sad but it flowed great and was easy to read awesome job i love it

  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy B

    great writing. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    OMG.. this is deep.. i mean, i reli felt as if i was the one u wer talkin bout.. i reli liked it.. ur rhyme was amazing n the floe was gr8
    keep it up
    nouna
    thnx 4 the comment

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    Wow, i could almost feel that pain. Very sad struggling poem and i couldnt think of a way you could possible make it better. GREAT JOB!

  • 18 years ago

    by jencam

    very very well written. very sad. nice job!

  • 18 years ago

    by jencam

    very very well written. very sad. nice job!