Mommy please!

by cαtαstrophe--x   Jun 27, 2005


Mommy, I need you,
please, I beg of you to stay,
I don't want to leave this place,
so warm here where I lay.

Mommy please!, please tell me,
what I did to make you ashamed,
I thought you loved me mommy,
but to you, I'm only a game.

I'm a win, loose situation,
and for you to win,I loose.
I want to live my life mommy,
what did I do to bother you?

Mommy, i love you,
but i guess to you I'm a disgrace,
please keep me mommy,
i promise to stay in place.

Oh, mommy, please don't do this,
I'd really like to stay,
I'll be good, i promise!
don't make me pay for your mistake.

I guess, you just don't bother,
to think I'm a person too,
in your belly yes,
but I'm going to be just like you.

Mommy! make it stop!,
this awful pain in my head,
mommy please just listen..
never mind,I'm already dead.

(C) Rachel 2005.

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  • 17 years ago

    by simply taylor

    Wow. that was really good. i really liked it. five outta five for sure! you are an amazing poet. i really enjoy your stuff.

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Rachel!! I love your poems, they're all amazing! I.Love.YOU. :P Keep on writing!
    -Natalie*-

  • 18 years ago

    by kat

    wow...that poem was really reaally ..good..its crazy

  • 18 years ago

    by Emily

    wow i love this poem. keep writing and if ya have the time check out some of mine!

  • 18 years ago

    by Theresa

    :'( how sad but its a great poem

    <3 Moe