Us

by brittany   Jun 28, 2005


Us

by
Brittany

we have something so spacial, that no one we'll ever be able to break us apart. we have an ever lasting love. u make me feel like no one has have made me feel when I'm with you all my pain all my troubles are gone theres just u and me me and u and when u kiss me oh wow baby i have never been kissed that way before time stands still for just a moment but i will treasure every moment like each moment is me last. lets not forget Ur touch, u have such a gentle touch its so soft and warm it makes me weak and i just melt to Ur arms. oh in Ur arms is were i want to be its were i feel soft form harm. and when u hold me close and just let me cry and cry when i have had a bad day or so something terrible has happed just lets me know how much you care. but being so far away from u it hurts i want to Be able to say good night and when i wake up Ur right there next to me to kiss me good morning. but that time has not yet come. so i will wait until that time dose came. i will not leave u now nor ever u are my and i am Ur yours for now and forever. i will always love you baby. u are my soul mate.

this poem is for my bf tanner.i love you so much baby.

please tell me what u all think. and if u have any suggestions. please feel free to tell me. this is only my 2ed poem. so I'm still kinda new at this.
thx

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  • 18 years ago

    by Dreamer

    You can see you mean it.. im happy for you, but love doesnt always end that well... you should always be prepared for the end, i found out. trust me... i learent the hard way.. you can see from my poems :P

  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Such a nice feeling.

  • 18 years ago

    by Holla_bac_kidd

    good job 5/5 good job keep up tha good work thx for all ur comments i really appreciated it

  • 18 years ago

    by DAYLON

    You made me cry with this one, but that is good thing. Your words touched my heart, and that shows a good poet. Have you got a dictionary? I notice you use spacial as term for area, instead of special as someone or something meaning something dear to you. I thought I proof read aswell, but I am fine one with my dyslexia. anyway, this poem is going to get 5/5. Take care hun.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lovemylove

    Wow this poem is so beautiful, by the way thanks for commenting on my poems.P.S. your a great writer too.

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