My Existence

by Mandy Lou   Jun 28, 2005


I finally see
It's all so clear
Nothing would change
If I weren't here

The sun would rise
The birds would sing
Nothing would change
Not even one thing

Who would notice-
Who would care-
If all of a sudden
I wasn't there?

My life means nothing
It kills me to say
That no one would notice
If I died today

**I'm in a weird mood...Tell me what you think!**

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley_LOVES_Jason

    never turn to suicide. its never the answer, always wait 5 more minuets.(its not literal just a figure of speech) keep in touch
    ~*~Ashley~*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley_LOVES_Jason

    never turn to suicide. its never the answer, always wait 5 more minuets.(its not literal just a figure of speech) keep in touch
    ~*~Ashley~*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Kia

    that's a good poem i like kinda short but sweet i know that feeling too. great job

  • 18 years ago

    by cαtαstrophe--x

    Wow, i think this is a really awesome poem. your very talented.
    take a look at my poems tell me what you think.

    Rachel <3

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