Psychotic

by Danny   Jun 28, 2005


I meet you
Alone
In the wood's
were no one will hear you scream

I draw a gun
Manicaly
Quickly pull the trigger
And your dead

But its not enough
I shoot you again
filling you with leaden death
Only stopping once you resemble road kill

But your not hidden
they may find you
I Rip you apart
Bury you
Get covered in your blood

The ticking stops in my head
I dont need to kill any more
I walk away
Oh what a lovely day

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  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Quite disturbing, but in a good way. You convey the scene so well, it really brought the poem to life.
    I also like the ending, it adds a brilliant element of terror.
    Take care and keep it up~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by Miss Ashley

    Ummmm......Very dark poem....scary...and...hmmm very... very dark...ahaha...
    -Ashley

  • 18 years ago

    by insane...need paded room

    That was a great poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Ele

    Appropriate title

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachael

    Pretty Cool But The Title Says The Rest

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