wow! that is sooo deep and so creative!! very well done!! kudos! lol! 5/5! awesome job!
love always,
Abcede

great emotion!

i like it!

5.5

love and hugs...

excellent. i liked the ending a lot. you are a good poet. keep up the good work
~*Freak*~

real real excellent job i could almost feel what it said great write keep it up
take care
HS

wow, i loved that. great poem!

uh-huh...i agree the dead are still alive...they still cry
5/5 nicely done

-angel-

Hey, i really like this, it's deep, people think that when they die all their pain will be over, but in truth it carries on.
Great poem, well done.

Thanks for commenting on my poems, i really appreciate it.

<3 Charli XxXxX

Wow, this one is truly amazing xxx

Deep.. and i love it