Cant wait

by brittany   Jun 28, 2005


Cant wait until the day that I'm in your again and forever.
>I need to be with you
>I need to be in your arms!
>I need to fill your touch,
>I need for you to be here
>with me, now and forever.
>my heart crys out for you
>cannt you hear it?
>But you are so far away
>I cannot wait to be with
>you, and see your smiling
>face, i will count the
>days, the hours, the minuets,
>and the seconds till we can
>be together again
>i miss you more then life
>its self,
>And i will love till the
>I die, and even more after that.
> with all of my love

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  • 18 years ago

    by DAYLON

    I can see you hating me, I notice another mistake that is natural with emotional expression, but you spelled minute wrong, you spelled it as minuets. I hope this helps so correct spelling is minutes. I hope this helps, but this is another great poem. All the advice I have people given me, I will pass it on. If you would like, also I will dig out writers news website for you and everyone.

  • 18 years ago

    by John Burbank

    is okay, not ur best, but still good, i like readin other peoples work, it shows me wat i need to work on and it also shows me wat i need to not work on for a little bit,
    love,
    brandon

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