When it spills...(part one-Her side)

by blackrose1011   Jun 29, 2005


You’re like any other, just shove it down
go on and wonder why…
but You’ll never cry, or show Your pain.
Your scares remain…
so many form the last rain.

it was that long ago, You let her hand go.
And now spilling to the surface,
Without her,
how do You plan to cope?

have You lost her... Your love?
or did You not even love her… Your lust?
do You understand what she had done?
could You comprehend the fear?

she was terrified You’d leave her…
she was terrified You wouldn’t.
the uncertainty, the unknowing
is to much for her now…

those eyes are there, looking at You.
as You allow it to come spilling out.
ask Yourself why now…
just ask Yourself why…

* I dont feel any of these need an explenation, you can take 'em how you feel like thaken' 'em. I just had a problem with someone I love very much, and how they reacted in a time of need. Or realy how I thought they would react. You can inturpit them in anyway...your the reader...think a little!*

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  • 18 years ago

    by blackrose1011

    all the y's in your and you in stuff are capitalized to show that the character whom is speaking conciders herslef less then the one whom she is speeking about. She feels that he is more important...

  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    Nice poem. Just one question though, if you don't mind me asking...why were the "y"s in the words "your" "yourself" "you" things like that? Peaces, //ari\\

  • 18 years ago

    by blackrose1011

    WHY DO YOU LIKE IT????

  • 18 years ago

    by abcede

    aw i really like this poem! it's so creative and original! 5/5 most DEFINATELY!! awesome job,
    much love,
    Abcede >,<

  • 18 years ago

    by blackrose1011

    what did you like about it though? what was it about my poem?