True...I can relate to this one. Flows well...very nicely done.

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Very cool! I don't really know what to say, but I loved the first stanza, "Gone" just really seemed to fit! 5/5 on a great poem! Best wishes...oh, wait, what is Mensa?

hey like u said, ur a brick in the wall...The brightest and most colorful. The rest are red while u r a BRIGHT YELLOW!!! good job! i2i

totally original...bloody good

love it well done

Brilliant message!! But what is this society where they dont allow you to contribute your thoughts...? All i know is that if i were a part of it, i wouldnt stand for it either. Everyone has the right to an opinion, no matter who they are. Not everyone may agree with the opion, but that is what makes us all so diverse. Good job(y)

Ana*