The petals of my life

by Kane Burden   Jun 30, 2005


You are so perfect to me
you are like a rose
changing with the seasons
but always remains just as beautiful as before

The time spent with you
i will never forget
you changed my insights
without changing my environment

I loved you in a way like never before
It was so perfect
it felt so right
but to be without you
would simply tear me apart

But you left for another education
and we saw each other far less
it was as before when together
but terrible when you left

It was hard having to wait for you
but it lasted 3 months
things became boring without you
the seasons became dull

We agreed on a break
but our hearts were still one
until i went and messed things up
and did something terribly wrong

I went for another girl
careless of the consequences
seeking something available
rather than a long lasting bondage

But we still remain friends
though i wish it were more
for my heart is torn without you
my heart is deteriorating now that your gone.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ana Vidovic

    Really nice, i enjoyed reading it:)

    Ana*

  • 18 years ago

    by kiesha

    That was beautifully written. There is a lot of emotion in it. I'm sorry things didn't work out the way you wanted them to, but I guess that's just the way it goes sometimes. Keep up the good work and take care.

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    It's a hard story to tell, but you did it with ease! Amazing write! 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    At first, it made me smile...then it became sad...alas, that's what happens in real life; you don't always get that happy ending...often you don't actually.... *sigh*

    Beautifully written poem.

    xxx