TWISTED part 1 -Let it cut deep

by Avrii Monrielle   Jul 1, 2005


Razor blade,dear razor blade...
I hold you to my arm...
Sleek-sliding razor blade...
It can't be any harm....
Razor blade,my sweet...
Help me break away my first cut..
Grab my soul and turn this to a mansion from a rut...
Sing away the pain that boys brought these few years...
Teach me there are no real things such as fears...
Open my first ever wound...
Tear my heart's broken remedy
Let my tears be your energy
Love,is nothing compared to the pain it brings

Let it cut...
Let it cut deep...
Let the words fall down...
Don't fall asleep...
Through the vein...
So it does not build...
So my first cutting will be beautiful...
Kiss my blood now...
Let it drip sweet...
Fall down in teary trickles...
The water of black roses....

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  • 16 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Well...I must be 100% honest! I do not like cutting poems, but on a poetry level...it was well-written with a unique style and good imagery.
    Charisma*

  • 18 years ago

    by girlii797

    Well...my advice is don't. Find someone you can talk to. An adult. A trusted adult. Not necessarily your parents because they might freak out. But a counselor at school, a trusted teacher...an aunt, uncle, cousin...or just someone u are close to. But make it an adult. I didn't ... i confided in a friend...she didn't help i just wanted to cut more. Once i did confide in an adult...i stopped...cuz he understood. I have gotten closer to him and i haven't cut since February. (there are weak moments...for me...and prolly for you too. But endure!). Your 12 you have a full live in front of you, ignore the ppl around you, their opinion won't matter in 10 yrs, unless u let it effect you now.
    So please don't cut...endure. I am here to talk if you need it. Ppl do care. I do and i have never met you.

    Stay Strong.
    Love
    ~girlii797

  • 18 years ago

    by gonnakeepsmiling

    amen

  • 18 years ago

    by abcede

    woah! twisted! that's all i can say! it was well written though!! lol
    love always,
    ABcede

  • 18 years ago

    by girlii797

    Are you really thirteen? Please tell me this isn't true. Even if you are "a very depressed girl", cutting isn't the answer...i am a voice of experience...it only brings those pain who find out..it may "help" you now...but it will bring pain later.

    Nice writing...Just hope it isn't true.