Broken Soldier

by LOST iN LOVE   Jul 1, 2005


I miss the days we shared
When you actually cared
My friend tried to warn me about you
"He really loves me" was all I told her
I miss how you called me your little soldier,
But soldiers are brave and strong,
Since you've been gone those are two qualities I lack
Please listen to me,I need you back
I know you found someone new,
But I can't let go of you
I saw you two together last night
You made it look so right
When I walked past,"I love you," was all you told her,
Now I'm nothing but a broken soldier

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  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    sorry! sounds lke you've been through a lot like me!

  • 18 years ago

    by hunnibunnz

    good poem...really strate to the point... good job XDX

    ~l3.R.0.l<.£.l\l.

  • 18 years ago

    by CandyPants

    sad poem! keep up the good work! (lol, i saw your quote, and thought i'd help you out.)

  • 18 years ago

    by _simply irresistible_

    oh thats very sad. wonderful poem tho..great job getting it all to ryme!! lol i always have trouble with that. anyways i love it. 5/5