Last Word's

by XxXangeltearsXxX   Jul 2, 2005


I miss the times we used to have
and the softness of your kiss
I miss the way you made me feel
My love you are sorely missed

The day you made that dreaded
choice
Has haunted me every day
Im longing now to here your voice
Wasnt there another way?

The last words that you said to me
i never will forget
You told me that you'd loved me
Everyday since we first met

If you could come back to me
Just for a day or so
I'd say something to change your mind
To make you not want to go

©XxXangeltearsXxX

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  • 18 years ago

    by XxXangeltearsXxX

    Ok i'll work on that bit too!!! you are most probably right!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by LAST RONIN

    Good Poem, I like the writing and the flow.. except this one line feels a little forced.. I'd say something to change your mind

  • 18 years ago

    by Amba

    Heart ache sucks so bad i no! but you hang in there! i hope everything turns out for the best for you!
    5/5
    xox Bam
    nice poem

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