3PuDdLe Of EmoTioNs3

by Sparklylipgloss   Jul 2, 2005


Stormy summer skies...
Tears as we say our goodbyes...

Will I see you this time next year...
That I will not is what I fear...

I thought about you all the time...
You made my world nicely rhyme...

Stop, don\'t leave, not quite yet...
But your ready, the time is set...

See you next year, I beg to say...
Pouring rain, in it I lay...

I have shut down, thinking of you...
The feelings I held were so true...

Don\'t bother to come back...
Emotions I do not lack...

Coming back will make it worse...
You are a drug, like a curse...

I am a puddle of emotions....

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  • 17 years ago

    by Megan

    I norm can't stand poems that rhyme...bu idk wha it is bout dis one that makes me like it so much...

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachele

    Thanks for the comment. your poem is really god. You said in my comment that you finally realize how serious cutting is. I'm glad you did, becuase cutting is such a huge problem that many people misunderstand. I hope your friend can get help with it. One way to really help her, is to just be there for her, and listen to her. That really helps me.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kirsty Koo

    I like it:) It reminds me of the way that you feel after you've cried too much...kind of exilarated?

    *thumbs up*

  • 18 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    this is soo good.. a great start.. with a strong ending.. keep writing..

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