a lot of emotions in there. I like the fact that you took a simple story and made it personal. Keep up the good work!

Take care,
Renee

i can tell it comes straight from the heart. wonderful job, dear. i'm sorry you had to go through that. at least you can use your experiences to write beautiful poetry that many others can relate to...and it may help/comfort them to know they're not alone.

xxx

Awsome poem! Your a good writer! Keep it up! =D

WOAH bec this is ur best mayb coz i relate 2 it mroe then n e 1 els exect u but yer 5/5 :O gr8 work

great poem..!!! 5/5! thanks for checking out my poem.. take care!

damn datz sooo good!!!..im sorry for all u've been through..im not a divorce child but even worse "a no dad child" i guess..n now no mom either cuz she kicked me out the house n i live w my sister now...by da way thanx for ur comment...luv, Vicky

i can really relate to this poem. my parents divorce changed everything, especially once my mom got remarried.

Very well written! fortunately I have never had to go through this! i loved the way you wrote it!! definately keep it up! 5/5

How sad I could feel your heartache as I read this poem! Very touching heartfelt poem! My ex his dad was always gone and now that he is older he is trying to make up for lost time and the abuse they endured when he was around. I hope everything will work out for you! It's a hard situation to be put in the middle of. Take Care! Brooke~

This is an amazing poem, I had chills reading it, I really understood your pain, Ive been there dear I know what its like, and you did a great job putting it in writing!
Xox Sherrie

Wow.. very beautifully written poem! so much emotion! your hard work shows thru =) i can see you worked hard and put you heart into this! i loved it... keep it up very touching poem! =)

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I totally get ur pain, my parents r divorced too. how you wrote about it though is really good. keep it up and kno that there will always be better days :)

Awwwwwwww
thats a good poem
but what its about is really upsetting so i hope it only gets better

Thanks so much for the comment.. one of my more, random and stupid poems, but thanks, ha. Love your poems.. O.O Reallly inspirational.. (I hate that word, but there was nothing better)