Josiah, You have done so many things to hurt me these passed couple of months that it is hard to forgive you. But i do because deep down inside i still love you more than anything in this world although your heart is not mine it's krissta's i still love you and i always will. Krissta go for it he's your's he loves you. Girl he's a great man the best i ever had and probley ever will have. I still love him but i know he will be happier with you so i am going to set my dove go and give it to you please take care of him this time. I love him and i always will but he loves you. Good luck to you both=:)

um okey thanks?

i love this poem a lot

jess

this is my favorite poem out of all your poems. this one touches my heart. keep up the good work.

jessica

Creative...really touching.

Take care,
undying blusher

Very nice poem. Don't you dare commit suicide though you are too good of a person than to do that. Never give in. Peaces, //ari\\

Yep, I must say that was a bad attempt at rapping.
Your not very verbose eh?
I didn't find any pleasure in reading this, probably just not my type of "poetry". You may find my comment stupid but I have to justify why I'm giving this a 2.

Thanks alot I shall return the fav. ;)

-Josiah

why won't you talk to me it's like you ignoring me plz talk to me

jessica

There was just one line that really got me.

"I want you to know my brain is confused
now that I abused the power of love"

probably your best line out of this peice. it holds a lot of questions and answers. but it didn't seem to fit into this poem.

Take Care,
Renee

very long poem. the rhymings kinda scattered but otherwise its good

its a bootiful poem...
Loving your work btw =p
keep it up
x0x0

neat poem! i lyke hows it written very different! keep it up! 5/5

Really interesting, sad poem. I think it's good to admit that you've made mistakes, i just dont believe we should have to die for these mistakes. You should live your life and learn for the next time, instead of making yourself pay for the past. Really great expression throughout. :D

Ana*

Wow really long poem but i enjoyed it....some of the rhymes seem forced though..but overall really nice joob...keep it up....thanks for the comment on my poem...it means a lot...luv yas mwah

-kayla-

Once again i say great poem 5/5, keep up the great work